The boy stretched out his hand, tapping exactly the right
spot. The green web illuminated the night forest, stretching as far as the eye
could see.
“Yes, yes, yes!” I shrieked as I sprinted forward to the
nearest bubble-like circle. Finally, I had my way in. “Here I come, Mom,” I
whispered under my breath.
The green lines of the web grew closer and closer until they
glowed right in front of me. I made the final jump. One moment, trees stretched
up above my head and the sounds of the jungle filled my ears. The next: silence,
complete and utter silence. And a stark whiteness. Absolutely nothing. This had
to be right, though. I knew that was the portal. What else could it have been?
My heart started pounding in my chest. Forget the questions-
I was floating in thin air. I had to find something, anything, to place my feet
on.
Then, a field of burnt grass flashed before me, the horizon
meeting with a charcoal gray sky spotted with dusty clouds. I dropped a couple
feet to the ground. Having landed on my knees, I didn’t even have time to
clamber to my feet before the world around me flashed away and the gravity-less
whiteness returned.
What was going on?
Something green- the same shade of green that the portal was
made of- flashed in front of me. I reached out, swatting at it, but it had already
disappeared.
I was just about to throw my hands and shout in hopes that
something would hear my frustration,
when I heard a shrieking sound. I craned my neck towards it, trying to decipher
the words.
“Our world is fading. We need Melody.”
Melody. My mom.
And that is all for today! :D Let me know what you think in the comments!
*applauds* xD
ReplyDeleteI love this sentence and the way you phrase it: "the horizon meeting with a charcoal gray sky spotted with dusty clouds." It just creates a fantastic picture in my mind!
Awesome job!
*bows* Thank you, thank you! XD
DeleteYay! I was actually a little unsure of that sentence, so you just made my day! :D